I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Ms Ah Kui.
Wednesday, 23 November 2011
Wednesday, 16 November 2011
My Beautiful Place
Far beyond the edge of the world is my beautiful place....
If you go there you will see very cool stuff.
As I woke up I could feel the breeze of the flowing cold wind.
I could see the sun relaxing in the air with his glasses on reading a book about the sun. There were tree branches made out of coco and also
the leaves were made out liquorice too.
I could hear sausages cooking on the BBQ. The sausages were mixed with sauce and mustard that tasted like raspberry and vanilla. As I got off the ground I ran quickly to the sea as I dived in like a dolphin jumping out of the sea and diving back in. The sea tasted like chocolate mixed with orange chocolate chip. It tasted delicious.
I sprinted out of the sea, when suddenly I tripped on a rock and fell on the sand with my mouth wide open. I closed my mouth with a little bit of sand in it. The sand tasted like pineapple. I thought it was a miracle. I was covered all over with sand as jumped back in to the air with joy.
I saw a bed tied onto the trees so I quickly ran to it. The bed felt very soft. It felt soft like a small tissue. I fell to sleep very quickly with a very big smile on my face. I thought I had a great time. Have you guessed where my beautiful place is...?
If you go there you will see very cool stuff.
As I woke up I could feel the breeze of the flowing cold wind.
I could see the sun relaxing in the air with his glasses on reading a book about the sun. There were tree branches made out of coco and also
the leaves were made out liquorice too.
I could hear sausages cooking on the BBQ. The sausages were mixed with sauce and mustard that tasted like raspberry and vanilla. As I got off the ground I ran quickly to the sea as I dived in like a dolphin jumping out of the sea and diving back in. The sea tasted like chocolate mixed with orange chocolate chip. It tasted delicious.
I sprinted out of the sea, when suddenly I tripped on a rock and fell on the sand with my mouth wide open. I closed my mouth with a little bit of sand in it. The sand tasted like pineapple. I thought it was a miracle. I was covered all over with sand as jumped back in to the air with joy.
I saw a bed tied onto the trees so I quickly ran to it. The bed felt very soft. It felt soft like a small tissue. I fell to sleep very quickly with a very big smile on my face. I thought I had a great time. Have you guessed where my beautiful place is...?
Monday, 14 November 2011
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