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Wednesday, 31 August 2011

The Battle


Once there was a boy called Jin. He was 18 years old. He entered a tournament. He was just
a beginner but he was really
good at fighting. Day by day he was the best of all.When he was finished he wanted to be a super hero and he called himself ninja Jin. He was strong like a giant.

But there was a villain called Osborn. Jin wanted to fight him so Osborn came to him fight
but Jin was fast so defeated him.

1 comment:

  1. Well done for finding interesting verbs from your story and using them in your own writing.

    I hope you think about using interesting verbs the next time you create a piece of writing.

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