It was windy as I looked out from the stadium to see Piri Weepu...leading the haka proudly and strongly with the number nine on his back.His face looked fierce like a tekoteko.As they finished their haka the game started. The whistle rang loudly as a lion and Piri Weepu kicked off. Piri Weepu was zooming across the field like a race car zooming through the track to the finish.
Piri Weepu tackled the person in front him as the crowd shouted “Go Piri Weepu!” The coaches said that he was born to play rugby. Piri Weepu was sprinting across the field as the other team tackled him but he broke out of the tackle like a bulldozer breaking through a wall. Piri Weepu passed the ball to his team mate as Piri ran to the try line.
His team mate kicked the ball across the field as Piri Weepu
bounced in the air as tall as a giant. He caught the ball and evaded back on the ground with a big shake like an earthquake. Piri Weepu sprinted to the try line. He made a humongous dive for the try and he landed on the ground and he got a try. The crowd went wild as a rainbow raised on top of Piri Weepu.
I really like the detail you added to the ending about a rainbow rising on top of Piri Weepu. It made me picture a very exciting moment at the end. Well done for adding detail to your story Tupou.
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