I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Ms Ah Kui.
Friday, 19 October 2012
The Talented One
The talented one
As I looked down beneath my toes I could see the crowd cheering for me and shouting “Go Tupou Go!.” I was really nervous that I could feel fear shivering up my bony spine. I was so freaked out that I was screaming for my mama in my head, but then I said to myself “NO I AM NOT GIVING UP I AM DOING THIS FOR THE CROWD AND MY FAMILY”. So I took a deep breath and took one step at the time very gently and very slowly until
I got to the middle...
I started to wiggle and jiggle a little bit and then that’s when my fears came back. So I closed my eyes and stood there for about five minutes that’s when the crowd started saying”BOO, BOO, BOO!”. I was so scared that I started shouting”AH AH AH !”. So I closed my eyes one more time before I was going to die and there I saw my great grandpa saying to
me “Someday you will become famous, and you will be famous because you have a talent to balance, so live it” So I said to myself TODAY IS THE DAY!”.
I opened my eyes and looked down and I said to myself “For Grandpa.” I felt confident so I walked slowly and slowly until I saw the end of the line I was so happy that I was nearly done. I got use to walking and balancing, it was so fun then suddenly I had finish. It was finally over I was so proud of myself and so was the crowd.
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